Thursday, March 26, 2009
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The person I admire the most is my mom. She is caring, and generous. She does things for my little sister and I even if she doesn't have to. Her caring, and generosity are what keeps me going. Whenever I have to do something that requires her to take me from place to place, she complains but does it anyway because of her caring and generosity. My mom's caring and generosity are what I look forward to in my life.
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Nicely written but there is no real use of repetition in this piece, and that's what you needed to incorporate.
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